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Jaska
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PostSubject: duality   Wed Jun 04, 2008 12:15 pm

The only thing I truly pain
Lurks beneath my flesh and
Is born within my brain.

Tear apart my soul
And take me away from me
Free me from my mind
I cant stand it anymore

Tear me from me
And close my eyes
I no longer want to see
The way I feel

I don’t want the way I live
Just want to be finally free

I am the walking contradiction
I allow the darkness to swell within
Like it’s some kind of addiction

I do, but I don’t... ever…
Want to miss a thing

A living man in disguise
That’s what I am
Like the source of a woman’s cries

To myself I’ve become a scam
A calamity in peace
And quiet in insanity

I want you to rip me
Piece by piece
Taking me from what I am

I Cant bear the way I see
I Cant stand the way I think
Help me be free
Tear me from me
Free myself from me.
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PostSubject: Re: duality   Wed Jun 04, 2008 1:23 pm

Wow is all I can say!
Did you write that Jaska?
It's got many levels of depth that can take you in many directions besides the obvious depression. It's almost profound in it's gutwrenching pain.
Was that for a class or putting feelings in writing?
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PostSubject: Re: duality   Wed Jun 04, 2008 1:51 pm

um... it wasnt for a class, and i have a tendancy of saying it isn't what i feel... but just what is there, lingering around me... so i guess the second option lol!
glad you liked it
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PostSubject: Re: duality   Thu Jun 05, 2008 1:45 am

Très bien!! Very deep, very brooding... I like!
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PostSubject: Re: duality   Thu Jun 05, 2008 3:14 am

Jaska ... what can I say, other than WOW! it takes the reader into all kinds of depths, very evocative writing.

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PostSubject: Re: duality   Thu Jun 05, 2008 11:03 am

*bows*


now gimme your money!
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