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Era Amunet
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PostSubject: Engaged with my thoughts   Mon Jan 21, 2008 3:06 am

A poem I just wrote I hope you like it!

I fly above the heads,
Engaged with my thoughts.
I am now without limits.

I fall to the ground,
Engaged with my thoughts.
I am now without anger.

I crawl under a rock,
Engaged with my thoughts.
I am now without fear.

I hide in my shell,
Engaged with my thoughts.
I am now without pain.
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PostSubject: Re: Engaged with my thoughts   Mon Jan 21, 2008 7:22 am

Deep. Very good!

Good Job
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PostSubject: Re: Engaged with my thoughts   Mon Jan 21, 2008 10:36 am

Nice! Me likey! -especially the last verse! Very Happy
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