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PostSubject: Song - Strip off the Mask   Sun Oct 14, 2007 2:55 pm

Yay! i christen this board!!!!

Strip off the Mask

Walking alone you bury identity,
Within locked doors, your individuality,
Like a parrot, you repeat phrases,
Sayings and opinions, everyone's phases.
Do you even understand yourself anymore?
Or do you know…but chose to ignore?

Forget everything and come dance with me,
Strip off this mask your holding and be free.
Ignore the gossip and let your smile shine,
Laugh at the stares and tiptoe on the invisible line,
Between Them and who you are inside,
Be yourself, there's no need to hide.

Beauty is not your size or weight,
How you dress, or whom you date,
It's about the person you are, how you think,
Not how much alcohol you can drink.
Hey, I can eat for England and do I care?
I'm not going to judge you or sit and stare.

Forget everything and come dance with me,
Strip off this mask your holding and be free.
Ignore the gossip and let your smile shine,
Laugh at the stares and tiptoe on the invisible line,
Between Them and who you are inside,
Be yourself, there's no need to hide.

If we are all the same,
Where would be the fun?
Life would lame,
Nothing new could be done.

Forget everything and come dance with me,
Strip off this mask your holding and be free.
Ignore the gossip and let your smile shine,
Laugh at the stares and tiptoe on the invisible line,
Between Them and who you are inside,
Be yourself, there's no need to hide.

Show me your colours and display your shades,
Don't let who you are and your beauty fade.

Feedback? please =]
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PostSubject: Re: Song - Strip off the Mask   Sun Oct 14, 2007 3:02 pm

I'm sorry but I cannot let this go:

How the Hell did you manage to type all that without any SMS Speak and yet you can't go 3 lines without doing it now?!?!

jocolor

Good songy thing by the way...

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PostSubject: Re: Song - Strip off the Mask   Sun Oct 14, 2007 3:06 pm

Logmadr wrote:
I'm sorry but I cannot let this go:

How the Hell did you manage to type all that without any SMS Speak and yet you can't go 3 lines without doing it now?!?!

jocolor

Good songy thing by the way...


OMG! Actually let it go LOL! And its cos all that was written in Word, so 1. spell check and 2. i copied and pasted it here.

and thank YOU =]
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PostSubject: Re: Song - Strip off the Mask   Sun Oct 14, 2007 3:29 pm

Wonderful Sabouki. Smile You are obviously very talented. Have you submitted your lyrics to anyone yet? What was their feedback? What style of music do you see your lyrics being sung to? Do you play any instruments?
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PostSubject: Re: Song - Strip off the Mask   Sun Oct 14, 2007 3:39 pm

Ook! wrote:
Wonderful Sabouki. Smile You are obviously very talented. Have you submitted your lyrics to anyone yet? What was their feedback? What style of music do you see your lyrics being sung to? Do you play any instruments?

Thanks Ook! And no, i havent, i wouldnt even know where to beginning, or who to send it to! I could see them been sung in a kind of Rock/pop/punk kind of genre....at least this song anyway. I'd love to sing my own lyrics, but i can't play an instrument, lol! One of my friends at school, is in a band, and he's read some of my songs and really like them and is suggesting to his band to make some music to is for me, so i could have some music to go with this song sometimes in the future, lol =]
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PostSubject: Re: Song - Strip off the Mask   Mon Oct 15, 2007 11:45 am

These lyrics are brilliant, Sacha - it would be great if you could get your friends to perform it and then if you could get it down on tape or CD so you could circulate it to record companies. You can find out who is looking for new material through the internet.

You should feel really pleased with yourself with this talent.

Well done, Sacha.

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PostSubject: Re: Song - Strip off the Mask   Mon Oct 15, 2007 12:20 pm

Sacha, Lizzie has very good recording equipment at her house, I'm sure with the right percentage of total gross profit we could arrange some sort of agreement Razz

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PostSubject: Re: Song - Strip off the Mask   Mon Oct 15, 2007 1:21 pm

Logmadr wrote:
Sacha, Lizzie has very good recording equipment at her house, I'm sure with the right percentage of total gross profit we could arrange some sort of agreement Razz

jocolor

LMAO!!

Ok, you can have 40% of my demo profit, lmao!!

I still need some music for it though! =S
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PostSubject: Re: Song - Strip off the Mask   Thu Oct 18, 2007 6:53 am

I'll write the music for it!!! lol.
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PostSubject: Re: Song - Strip off the Mask   Thu Oct 18, 2007 7:25 am

I thought you might! I can't wait for the finished article.

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PostSubject: Re: Song - Strip off the Mask   Thu Oct 18, 2007 9:42 am

Aoife wrote:
I'll write the music for it!!! lol.

YAY!! Thanks lover!

I loved the music to your other song, so i hope you can do me something as good as that =]
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